Perhaps Dawn broke the fourth wall for the sake of the reader or something (I don’t know). It wouldn’t be a first time a character broke the fourth wall.
Hopefully that helps. Also, don’t take anything I said as exactly what happened. For instance, I inferred that Josiah is kind of summoned when Dawn makes Grammatical errors, because he was last seen captured by The Phantom. It could be this is taking place earlier though.
Different Chris.
Dawn and Manalive are in some place called ‘The Wood In-Between’ (I think), and Ryan’s alter ego is there also, who switches to just Ryan. Dawn seems to also have an alternate name. She makes errors as she speaks on purpose, which essentially recalls Josiah from the Phantom’s Grasp.
Sparkies
(I’ve never heard of that movie.)
Brooke shielded her eyes from the two suns and surveyed the land ahead from the cliff she found herself upon. If the people from the town she left 3 miles behind her were correct, there would be another town conveniently in just another 15 miles. Even so, she had more than her share of walking the past month. She started walking.
She had gotten caught up in the portal along with Peter, Dawn, and Manalive, but something pulled Peter away from them, and had the after effect of throwing her out also, away from Dawn and Manalive. When she landed she managed to find civilization and discover that, though ancient, there were records of Time Lords in this world.
She went into the town and found directions to the outpost, grabbed supplies, and was on her way again. Night would soon fall, but she went on. She hadnât been a Time Lord long when Kristen had started manipulating her. It was too easy too. But after walking by herself for pretty much a month she had dealt with it. When Josiah First confronted her in Hyrule, she was sorry, but part of her was just sorry she got caught, and not to mention angry about being abandoned by Kristen.
She came to the stone building. It was still shut. None had tried getting inside, apparently it was too weird. Besides, anyone but a Time Lord would have all sorts of trouble opening the door, and even then, she might have some issues since this station was from earlier Time Lords. None the less she managed to open the door. Everything was undisturbed, she might have a chance at finding what she was looking for. She entered and closed the door behind her.
She made her way to a center chamber that had a circle that was just a step up surrounded by four pillars. Thatâs what she needed. She turned around and started looking for a spell room. She found it without much trouble. If luck was with her, the spell she needed was still intact. She looked around glass bottles and jars, and rummaged through the books and scrolls until she found everything she needed. A book with an incantation and a jar of Jtary. She ran back to the center chamber.
Brooke stepped into the middle of the circle and leafed through the book. She found the right page and started reading. If the spell worked, she would be taken to the Time Lord homeworld. From there, she would be able to find things that would allow her to join back with the others. From there she would try and undo what she had done.
âLom yishan catagelophobia âŚâ She pillars started shaking, it was working. She opened the jar as she continued speaking. â⌠Clomro Agoraphobia!â
With the final words of the spell everything began to shake, and a glow emanated in front of her. She was ecstatic when the portal followed the glow. After about a month she would found out what happened to everyone. Then the glow stopped. The shaking stopped, and the portal disappeared. It hadnât worked. Maybe she did it wrong. Maybe she mispronounced something. Maybe everything here was just too old, and outdated. Whatever the reason, she lost her one chance. The jar was empty, and it was the only one she had found.
Brooke sat down and just stared a moment. All she had done since being separated was pointless now. No. She wouldnât be defeated. The spell didnât work, but that didnât mean the outpost was useless to her. She might be able make more jars of Jtary, and try again. She had to, so she could make amends.
With that she stood up and turned around to see what resources she had. She didnât go far when she heard a hum from behind her. She turned around to see a portal spit a man out. He landed on his face as a metal box rolled from his hand, Brooke was taken aback by the sudden appearance of the paranoid looking stranger as he struggled to stand up.
He managed to find his balance. âWe â uhr. I did it. I escaped.â It was Peterâs brief companion, Douglas.
Ryan I Matlock
Matthew Get It Bird
Yes, I agree.
What does everyone think about Blimey Cow’s style shift?
Perhaps you should consider doing more reviews Mason.
IT”S A PUN!!
Tank Engine, and don’t doubt it.
I never really watched it as a kid, but here I am.
I ate as well, and now I’m watching Thomas. I got home earlier and thought ‘Great tomorrow is a school day’, so I sympathize with you.
My stomach remains unsatisfied, but I shall soon remedy that. I turn the same question to you.
I extend salutations to you, Potato of Awkward.
And more expensive.
Green
Blue
I’m not into football, so all those points don’t help me.
You might be a little late, Josiah.
When they aren’t
Super Mario Odyssey isn’t out yet, what do you mean?
I shall take my stance alongside Josiah, or President Eisenhower.
Yes. I am familiar with ‘the document’.
Do you take a lot of classes?
Well thank you. I actually meant to say I was happy that I didn’t have the homework.
No, I think it’s been resolved, I’m just not where that places things. I don’t think the story is backing up to the Chris reveal, and Kumquat is still in the story, but he doesn’t seem to be Chris. It might be at page 19 from the original thread. from there it would write out pretty much everyone being in the simulation. Of course, I’m not sure about all of that, so if someone knows better, let us know.
Sad news. I don’t like online classes (actually I can’t stand them), and an online class I have doesn’t have the normal homework this week.