I’m about 7 pages into converting the story so far into a screenplay format and man, you guys went from 0 to 60 REALLY FAST.
There’s a normal progression of events and reveals and then suddenly it’s just like,
“Oh hey, what’s up with that slight continuity error?”
“Oh, it’s because I’m FROM SPAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAACE!”
“LET’S TAKE A RIDE IN MY MAGIC SNOWGLOBE!”