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(The “oy” was to you being up for 15 hours, not you not figuring things out. Don’t feel obligated to go to bed.)
(IS THIS A SUPERCHRIS01 I SEE BEFORE ME?)
(yep, live from hiding somewhere at Wendy’s closing dining room)
( ok thank you for saying something I was trying to figure out what that meant. I was concerned I had made you mad and I didn’t mean to. I realize me being new maybe be annoying to some people because I realize everyone here is so close already.i am so grateful you all are accepting me so far because I’ve recently been through a lot of things and this is a really amazing thing that I have enjoyed along with the podcast. So thank you guys for making me feel welcome and letting me join in on this epic story and the Not-Forum. ?)
(It would be funnier if you were hiding in the closet dining room.)
(Haha, sure. Don’t worry about me getting mad, I don’t enter into such a state easily. I’ll occasionally get annoyed at people for saying things that I blatantly disagree with, but yeah, you’re fine.)
(Phew… sigh of relief) (THANKS! But now I have a date with my lovely blanket and pillow aka body sponge haha)
(I’m hiding in the women’s restroom “cleaning”)
(Woah chris. That’s not PG)
(I hope you sleep well, bekah!!! We welcome everyone with open arms!!)
(WOAH BEKAH NO!!! HOW IS BEING NEW ANNOYING? BEING NEW IS AWESOME and kinda scary because we’re all a leeettlle bit not sane y’know?)
(Thanks guys that means a lot. I really appreciate that enthusiastic message Dawn lol! And thank you Kristen guys that makes me happy! Lol . ” sigh” ” wipe tear of happiness” haha)
(Aww! The friendships some of us have made on here has affected us deeply. Life changing. I hope you get something out of this! It’s truly amazing and beautiful!!)
(It’s true! I encourage you to perhaps start a themed-thread of your own, or begin posting on some other ones!)
(Yess!!! And we get less scary as you get to know us. Well, except me. I probably get a bit more scary)
(I think it’s like “Oh wow, they’re really scary!” and then it’s like, “Hey, they aren’t so bad,” and then it’s like, “Okay, my first assumption was right, they’re worse than I thought,”…)
(I concur.)
( ok guys so i have. Friend named Elsie who absolutely loves reading so I copy pasted our story into a word document and sent it to her and she added to it so I’m gonna put it on here since we haven’t added in awhile.)
(Hahaha.)
(Ooh, cool!)
Peter who had been swept into the vortex saw nothing but darkness felt nothing solid beneath his feet. The air around him was cold and he felt a sickening ache start deep in his bones. His heart pounded in his chest and he felt as thought he was being pressed between two cement walls that squeezed him harder and harder until peter couldn’t breath. His body needed oxygen he needed to breath now. His lungs stung. The walls around him squeezed him tighter and he felt a rid crack under the presser, he tried to gasp but no air came to his lungs. The movement sent a ripping pain through his chest and he tried to scream but he still couldnt he felt his heart start to beat slower with every second and he knew he was going to die here in the darkness all afraid, alone, and helpless. Peter felt a fiery pain course through his veins, all he wanted to do was die. Die and the pain would be gone. “Let me die” he wanted to scream “Let me die!”
Peter felt his eyes droop and an even deeper set of darkness invaded his mind. Peter woke, opening his eyes bright sunlight stung his eyes and he blinked waiting for his eyes to adjust. He lay there for a while his body still in pain. He finally sat up and automatically regretted it white hot pain exposed in his chest, he inhaled and another sharp pain jabbed at him. He finally braved himself to get up “one” he told himself “two…three” he stood and grunted in pain. He looked around he was in a field of grass inform of him was a forest of trees mountains stood strong and proud to his right and to his left was nothing but scorched sand he didn’t look behind he had just realized he was alone. How could that be? He saw others sucked into the vortex too! So where were they? Maybe they were behind him maybe he wasn’t alone! He grudgingly turned around just in time to see a stuen come out of a patch of long dead grass.
The stuen looked like a tiger but was made completely of black wood except it fangs and teeth witch were sharp as razors it’s only instinct was to kill and that’s what it did best.
Peter stumbled backward and tripped, he landed on his back and cried out in pain but he ignored it best he could and shuffled backwards before standing back up, the stuen gained closer running at full speed to catch its prey, peter ran as fast as his rib would let him. Towards the woods towards even more danger.
(-Elsie)
(what’s a stuen?)
(poor Peter. He was just reunited with everyone)
(Hi Chris!)
(Hi Carrot!)
(How’s it going?)
(This is beautiful but it makes me sad…)
(Trube.)
(Sorry. Fell asleep. Just kind of tired in general, lol. In short, I’m upset over the Moto X4, forgot my sister’s birthday was today, and had a little bit of an accomplishment when I finally shaved after a few days. Also trying to think of a direction for Super Chris in the story. I didn’t think much farther than where he’s at now.)
(To be honest, you could take him anywhere… You could do some backstory development… That’s always nice…)
I’m not sure what “stuen” is either. Google says it’s a Norwegian word for “living room”, but I don’t think that’s what Peter was running from.
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