I think it did an excellent job of capturing memories from the trip! I liked how you weren’t afraid to mix in vertical video with your regular-sized video; It gave the vlog more of an authentic feel. You also mixed in pictures and captions at appropriate moments and had some fun with editing effects. Super cool! 🙂
If you’re really wanting a “what could I have potentially done better so I know for next time” remark, montages like 1:39-1:48 are excellent opportunities to add in some music to the background. It’s not wrong to not include music, but if done well, music can help to hold the mood or set the mood of the video during lengthy otherwise silent scenes. The rest of the vlog always had music or background noise going on, so the silent portion stands out a little bit. Just something to keep in mind for next time.
