To #7562, I wasn’t aware that it did exist. The new draft is loads better. I’m still holding out hope that the final draft will have a happy ending, but the survivor has much more personality in this version. The way you captured their combination of guilt and relief was good, we actually got a sense of their history. Now I’m feeling conflicted. Why did you have to get all specific about knives and abdomens? I think for the purposes of this story she is evil and she needs to be killed, but in reality all life is sacred, and that makes it hard.